Thread:WyrnShogun02/@comment-3542404-20150419195657

If you haven't noticed by now, there are several problems you need to address with your work:


 * How did you combine multiple timelines into a single one? (ie AG, AD, UC, CE and AW) And what happened to the the events that happened during those timelines?


 * The GNP Drive makes no sense at all: A photon is a unit of light, ergo you're combining light with GN particles, which makes no sense at all (especially since this is basically taking a torch and shining it at a GN Drive).
 * And how/why does it have weapons? 